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MORE A MESSAGE THAN A POEM

Have we ever seen through ourselves? have we?
On the deep dark streets of memoirs haven't we ever felt guilty??
When the Sun blessed us wid success, didnt we congratulated ourselves?didnt we feel proud?
But when failure eclipsed our good times didn't we blame others?
didnt we make a mutual agreement wid conscience?
How many times have we considered ourselves unlucky--
when the situation was to blame ourselves only.
And fate was there,alwayz,
more as an excuse than a belief.
God got blamed evrywhere we failed.
And we praised ourselves anywhere we won!
Think back,its never too late to change things.
We shouldn't pay for what we have done in the past
but it is the time we take a lessson and see through ourselves.
probably we can clear out the black dots in our mind
wid consciousness added to right judgements.

Comments

Anonymous said…
Hi,

This 'poem' if i can call it so was quite impressive in terms of its thought. I take that u must have attempted a non-rhyming verse and its fair enough, but i thought that it should have a steady pattern if not metre straight away. and please do not use sms or net abbreviations when it comes to writing poems n all..it bugs!
No offense intended..but just wrote what i felt.
April 02, 2006 12:06 AM
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