Then you will List ,
--your Tooth brush and My tooth brush
--My Shaving cream
--Your cosmetics
--My books
--Your music player
--My clothes
--Your clothes
--A comb that we will share.
--Some medicines
I will check
And pick up the pen
To add
--
--
+ --My Love
--Your love?
Somehow
of all the things,
it had to be mentioned
if for once we forget
To leave it behind.
And pretend
We didn't ,
till date.
SoUmY@
[Stone me .I know weirdness has its limits]
--your Tooth brush and My tooth brush
--My Shaving cream
--Your cosmetics
--My books
--Your music player
--My clothes
--Your clothes
--A comb that we will share.
--Some medicines
I will check
And pick up the pen
To add
--
--
+ --My Love
--Your love?
Somehow
of all the things,
it had to be mentioned
if for once we forget
To leave it behind.
And pretend
We didn't ,
till date.
SoUmY@
[Stone me .I know weirdness has its limits]
Comments
You'd be surprised how close this is to reality!
Fantastic imagination! I say that because I know, for sure, you haven't lived this:D
Great verse, Soumya, absolutely a stunner of a poem!
m a weirdo den
ma taste!!!!!!!
3 cheers for innovation!!(weirdness as you say..:P)
Loved the last stanza - it perhaps sums up the entirety if the write..:)
Lovely thoughts portrayed.!!
Oh yeah not weird at all! new template I liked it!
Somehow
of all the things,
it had to be mentioned
if for once we forget
To leave it behind.
And pretend
We didn't ,
till date.
An absolutely brilliant way to end it!!
And no,you aren't weird!!!
An absolute treat for those who havent been thru it, for the structure.
For those, less fortunate, another episode o incessant bleeding.
You manage both. May nothing of this pass you, ever.
God bless. :)
I just loved this piece...so simple and loving.
You have a very keen observant and percepting mind yaar !!
Wow !!
And this aint weird. You know, you just wanna fork out some cheesy cream and butter covere commnst thas why you said that dint you ? The truth is you must have loved it to the hilt..!!!
do read ma blog wen u find time
I love the sarcasm which shines through the write.
Intelligent skeptic!!
Marvellous.