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Interrupted

Thousand of words like these
I can write for you
Which you won't ever see
Which I will put to flames
and inhale the blue death

Was it too much to ask twice?
You will talk of rough edges
Point out to missing commas , fullstop.
I will nod correcting my emotions
At the cost of them

When can you ever sense
The feeling I have for you
Suffocates and dies under the velvet
That adorns my poesy
But buries my love ,

,Interrupted.


SoUmY@

Comments

Cinderella said…
Beautiful !

**Inhale the blue death**

Loved the expression. So many interpretaions can come out of this apparently simple expression....wonderful !!
September 08, 2008 2:15 AM
Muse said…
Beautiful, indeed! And yes,Ahem Ahem ;)
September 08, 2008 7:42 AM
Usha Pisharody said…
Great sense of poetry, as always, and a wonderful sense of punctuation, of life itself!
September 25, 2008 9:52 AM
Shewolf said…
speechless as always.
October 14, 2008 9:40 PM
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