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>> Mar 28, 2006

GARDEN OF FEELINGS

I have a garden of roses.
flowers-- only friends for me.
different smells match the human emotions i suppose,
the world as it is today,mixed emotions portrayed in small canvas
there are the red roses
they remind me of the vivacity,the enthusiasm i used to have sumday
i know little about the outer world
the activities,the events.
my only source,my garden grows wid worldly experince.
i look at the pink ones-
sensuality,some kind of wisdom.
the black ones-
awares me of the dark shades of human nature.
there are my favorites,white roses.
peace,generosity and kindness all over it.
the fragrance,mixed emotions of human mind-
my garden use to convey them to me.
But until one morning..wat do i see!!!
the white flowers,all of them,have gone pale overnight.
they are no more.
the more i looked i for,disappointed i got.
i searched my garden madly
not a trace of white;nowhere to be seen.
i asked,"Hey God why did u do this to me,why my garden?"
someone whispered,"Boy,i asked the same question to men"
there was silence from both ends.

2 well-wishers:

Anonymous March 29, 2006 1:54 AM  

amazing.....

Anonymous November 21, 2006 12:52 AM  

This poem is beautifully beautiful..the language is simple,but the poem has an inner deeper meaning.Spellbinding imagery and suggestiveness makes the poem magnificent as well as refreshing.However there was sumthing that I truly felt-The use of 'Hey' to adreess god especially in a poem such as this lessens the gravity of the poem.

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