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Of Ecstasy...

>> Feb 10, 2009



Beyond the horizon lies the gray
that rests between your feet, delicately.

Waves ripple and glide past the footsteps,
Silently washing off your prints afar,
Uncomplaining in tender reverence.

You raise your arms as if to embrace the sea.
I see twilight, I feel air gently hushing by.

The crimson Sun is at its last breath
And caresses you with quiet blessings.

As your innocence reflects upon
the gracing Sun and the soothing sea

I stand mute and mesmerized...
... Oblivious of the rest as the triad touches me

And I cry, just.


SoUmY@

[p.s. -> This post of mine is inspired by the picture atop.

I thank Jennifer for letting me share this. And this piece goes to Angel.]

15 well-wishers:

Winnie the poohi February 10, 2009 4:13 PM  

*sigh*

Pragnya February 10, 2009 7:46 PM  

ahh.....ANGEL did u say???
*winks*
lovely poem....the last line brought lumps to my throat.

eddies February 11, 2009 12:03 AM  

your words have a healing effect.

extremely sundry.

Sashu... February 11, 2009 2:34 AM  

soothing...tender....magical..ecstasy...! :)

Jenny February 11, 2009 3:10 AM  

This is really really special..I cannot begin to express it in words..I can't wait till angel has a look .The poem as if was made for the moment.

Soumya February 11, 2009 8:26 AM  

@Winnie

Hi :)

@ Pragsy

Lol, nothing like that. She is a kid even to you. Glad that you liked it. :)

@ Anisha

Thank you for visiting. Your words have a comforting effect if I may add.

@ Sashu

overjoyed with your presence. Thank you miss.

@ Jennifer

Yes please bring in my chief guest here. And you do not need to say anything either. Thank you.

Shal February 11, 2009 8:51 PM  

This was breathtaking ! :)

Pretty Me!! February 12, 2009 10:04 AM  

that was captivating .. i was just lost in the poem ..

ps: blogrolling you :) so keep sharing your wonderful words !

Muse February 12, 2009 10:56 AM  

Sheer Magic!!!!So tender :-)

Usha Pisharody February 14, 2009 1:37 AM  

Amazingly magical.

This moving and tender poem, makes me cry too.

Jenny, your daughter is so beautiful, and this poem is so perfect for her :)

The triad of the sun sea and her, is a moving picture too!

Varya February 15, 2009 4:33 PM  

The photograph indeed brings so much into one's heart. You've worded it beautifully Soumya :)

Jenny, your Angel os so angelic. I thank Soumya because of whom I got to see her with the setting sun and flowing breeze...

Jenny February 16, 2009 3:09 AM  

Not all gifts are giftwrapped.
Some come as blessings in disguise..

Thanks for this joyful experience once again.I am overwhelmed..

Painting the Savanna... February 18, 2009 10:08 PM  

this was so touching... and so beautiful..
The loss we actually gain as life passes have such beauty attached to them...
meenakshi

Rukhiya February 25, 2009 1:55 AM  

Beautiful,just. :)
IF a moment could stop by to blow such ecstasy on us, we'd be grateful to the 'Create'or, just, as much as we are to the creator of this piece. :)

hary!! April 06, 2009 9:10 AM  

whoa, the pic & the lines...beautiful! good one!

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