Sur-Prizes!

Sur-Prizes!
Honored by Usha Ma'am & Rukhiya

Drowning

>> Dec 16, 2012


Castles and dreams are a lot alike.
They have unwanted air of decorations,
You build brick by brick, red faced,
for years; one day, they wake up to reality.

Love is a what-if.
Try your blood and water may it be.
In the end, they wake up to dreams.

In absence of a quarrel,
there is no peace.
Silence it is,
one that speaks too much.

It is more like pulling the chair
while you were sitting
right in the heart of the ocean.

It's a slow, slow fall.


Soumya

3 well-wishers:

Noopur Kothari December 23, 2012 8:20 AM  

Indeed one!!
Got your link from indiblogger...and I found it worth landing here :)

Noopur
http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

Usha Pisharody February 06, 2013 8:31 AM  

Why does Inception come to mind?

The last line?
The lost in dreams feel?
The tangible emotion?

Lost in this verse!

Sunitha July 02, 2013 5:58 PM  

I like the feel about this verse.. And I get the feeling I will be here more often..

The Hungry Tide

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