Sur-Prizes!

Sur-Prizes!
Honored by Usha Ma'am & Rukhiya

The way we are...

>> Jun 7, 2009

I have played with life.
Whimsically I found it shaped
sometimes squared, a bit spherical, is it?
Oh no, you see an undefined orbit.

On that squarish route,
My life has been squeezed
to insignificant volumes.
Fame, success, caustic lights-
They allure me in different domains.

I wonder if there is too much of me
in my words or so much of I.
An I for an I-
the world revolves around an ellipse.
Sometimes too close to life
and too far when you wish...

In this pattern which follows disorientation,
Comes the knowledge, hence the realization
and awaits a human in their shadows,
Owning them.

Life, as it is,
wouldn't have ever been the same
if there were definitions of you and me.

So I say, must you agree (?)
we make rooms square
To embrace surety.

...the Earth is round!


SoUmY@

5 well-wishers:

Sashu... June 07, 2009 11:25 AM  

I wonder if there is too much of me
in my words or so much of I.
An I for an I-
the world revolves around an ellipse.

brilliant lines there!! absolutely stunning a thought n expression this write!! loved de opening n closin lines too!! :)

Pankti Vora June 08, 2009 8:29 AM  

Its simply beautiful...and indeed the way we all are...

Mahita June 14, 2009 3:51 AM  

"Life, as it is,
wouldn't have ever been the same
if there were definitions of you and me.."

Superb!

kamna June 16, 2009 11:29 PM  

Genius oin you here!
Brilliant work..
loved it through..completely loved it!

shut up n write! June 19, 2009 1:15 AM  

nice!!!

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