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Strangers

>> May 13, 2010

Let us not know each other tonight
Let us not think what we could have said,
what we had to, what we can, what we should.
Let us just, unknowingly, make a story.

Today you can just hold my hand, or not.
We can keep silence; it grows distance
which someone says, is comforting.
I can blurt it out today.
I can tell you how many times I have missed you
and cried and laugh about it, just.
You can count yours. Happy face?


Let us not call it a love too.
We have seen too much of it, haven't we?
Let us just unknow what we don't
And say, we knew each other, unknowingly.


SoUmY@

6 well-wishers:

Cinderella May 13, 2010 12:35 PM  

Absolutely astonishingly honest!

Love it.

Rini May 14, 2010 10:47 AM  

Just what I'd wanted to read NOW! :-)

Diversity Under Constructiont May 15, 2010 10:36 AM  

i could relate! loved the read!

Sadhogopal Ram May 16, 2010 2:08 AM  

Rhythmical and melodious, my dear.. and then the feel as exquisite just made it perfect.!

Scribbler May 28, 2010 4:27 AM  

:)

Strangers indeed

keep it rollin;)

Poonam J July 01, 2010 10:55 PM  

Let us not know each other tonight
Let us not think what we could have said,
what we had to, what we can, what we should.
Let us just, unknowingly, make a story..........Love these words
...seems u captured moments of my life...
Live life, in its temporary madness, be strangers yet together

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