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Honored by Usha Ma'am & Rukhiya

Hallucination

>> Mar 14, 2008

I scribble past
The words
Just to realise
There is this endless space
waiting for your pen
To write on
But
You are the one
Who is
Running ahead of it..
Or
May be
Falling behind ??

SoUmY@


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rukhiya March 14, 2008 1:28 AM  

A brilliant verse that talks about the different poets,those who write long,those who keep it short,for both :)

Usha :) March 14, 2008 4:04 AM  

I am amazed at the way in which I feel you have grasped the nuance of the timelessness of space! With the words that sometimes arent enough (as it is for me now:))you have managed to encompass a breadth that is quite stunning.

Loved this one, the succinct way you spread a net across enormity, timeless and spaceless..!!

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