Sur-Prizes!

Sur-Prizes!
Honored by Usha Ma'am & Rukhiya

Suicidal...

>> May 18, 2008

I would have loved
A nod.
Even 'No'
Would have been bearable
To compromise with
Some sleepless nights.
But
Your compassionate pause
Built me a glass wall
That was opaque enough
To hide my face
so that tears could escape
Unquestioned.

And
That was when
I started to like the
Glass palace around,
Because I had to
Defy the moments
you were in.
...
Unaware
I fought against me.


SoUmY@

3 well-wishers:

rukhiya May 18, 2008 11:51 AM  

You have a way to make me cry,gasp,smile,amaze-do everything at once!Anything I add has been said already, il only reitirate and ofcourse i dont fancy saying cliche things :)

Usha :) May 20, 2008 1:52 AM  

Defies words to describe my feelings, this one!

If you have really experienced this, you'd know, that there isn't simply anything to say, except stand in shock that someone actually enunciated that...

*no more words*

kamna November 29, 2010 7:18 AM  

EXEMPLARY!!!
pierced the ryt spot in few words...
Very well crafted!

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